- "Mr. Aslam's BP is way too high."
- Change "just to let you know" to "This is to inform you" and "a bit high" to the specific reading.
- "You need to come see the patient in 202 now."
- "FYI, BP in 202 is 160/100."
SCENARIO 15: Review the email draft: “Dear Dr. Khan, This is just to let you know that Mr. Aslam’s BP in room 202 is a bit high at 160/100.” How could this be improved for professional tone?
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